I have changed a lot. I used to be short when I was younger, but now I am tall. I used to spend a lot of time playing games with my friends, but now I have to study all the time. I used to be quiet, but now I’m outgoing and active. I often take part in all kinds of activities. I used to hate gym class, now it’s my favorite class. I used to walk to school, now I go to school by bike. Is it a good thing or bad? As we grow up, we can have a lot of changes.

　　I really have changed a lot, and you?

批 改 老 师：李老师
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评      语：
从身高、爱好、性格等方面介绍自己的变化，能让我们看出作者是一个乐观的中学生，结尾较好。继续努力！