The Spirit of The Olympic Games

　　The Olympic Games are held every four years. As a great many people visit our country, immense stadia such as Water Cube, a new Olympic—standard swimming pool have been built. So we are looking forward to it enthusiastically.
　　 I am that grateful as a volunteer in the Olympic Games. Volunteerism is composed of: dedication, mutual aid, progress and fraternity.
　　But if you are really want to be a true volunteer, which is a highly respected position, you must do the above in your heart. And of course, you are not paid to do these things .
　　So there are many people with the hope that they can be qualified for this job.

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批 改 老 师：李老师
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本文用词准确，而且很多都是高级词汇，句式多样，是篇好文章！