Many things can affect our feelings , such as colors , weather , music and the environment . I like listening to music . When I am happy , rock music always makes me excited . When I want to sleep , I listen to soft music . It can make me fall asleep quickly .
Movies can affect my feelings and moods . Different movies can change my feelings . When I watch sad movies , it can make me cry . It's so moving . But when I watch interesting movies , it can make me laugh . It's so funny.
If we are in good spirits , we can study or work better . So it's very important for us to be in a good mood . We must learn to stay in good spirits .
批 改 老 师：周老师
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本文介绍了作者调节心情的方法，层次分明，结构合理。文中没有拼写错误，但个别地方用词没有注意到前后一致，如：第三段中的“It can make me cry. It's so moving“以及最后两句中的“it”都指的是倩文中的“movies”因此都应改为“they”，“be”动词也应改为“are”。作者的英语基础不错，应用能力也较好，但需继续努力，多加练习。