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历年高考英语满分作文名师点评及英语答题技巧(7)

时间:2010-07-31来源:网络整理栏目:网友投稿英语作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
4. 参考栏目:栏目column Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns whic

  4. 参考栏目:栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

  【名师点评】

  这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。

  比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度,不可谓不让人佩服。

  【江苏卷】

  【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生:

u  每天锻炼一小时

u  健康工作五十年

u  幸福生活一辈子

  请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。

  注意:

  1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

  2、 词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

  3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

  教育部——the Ministry of Education

  Good afternoon, everyone,

  The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students’ health, was held from 10:00a.m.--11:00a.m. on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

  The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

  In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!joozone.com

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