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历年高考英语满分作文名师点评及英语答题技巧(5)

时间:2010-07-31来源:网络整理栏目:网友投稿英语作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their student

  Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

  What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

  Thank you for your listening!

  【名师点评】

  这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

  积累卡片英汉互译

  好词1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟

  4. open-minded adj. 虚心的

  好句1. Students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

  同学之间应该互相倾听,这样他们可以互相学习和帮助,也会形成友谊。

  评析:复杂句的组合,被动句的使用。

  2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

  我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

  评析:复合句的使用。

  【湖北卷】

  【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。

注意:1. 词数为100左右;

2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;

3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th April 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment, he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I cannot wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

  Thank you for your consideration.

  Sincerely yours,

  Bu Manyi

  【名师点评】joozone.com

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