2011年考研英语作文预测范文一：网络的利与弊

 
到底听谁的？
思路点拨
　　本图中，一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑，“10牛的水是否产生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上网求助于网友，网友的答案更是五花八门，说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可见，这幅图反应了这样一个现实：网络文化有利也有
弊。因此本文可以这样设计：
　　第一段：描述图画；第二段：网络的利+举例，网络的弊+举例；第三段：提出建议措施——取其精华，去其糟粕。
　　思路拓展
　　所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。
作文地带整理高分范文：
　　Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious
that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
　　The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on
the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it
can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty
information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
　　In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people
to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
　　佳作妙译
　　如图所示，图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题，来自于网友的答案差异太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显，人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。
　　这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面，因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如，通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标，我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面，由于因特网上有海量的信息，很难区分好的
信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的，其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。
　　总之，一方面，充分利用因特网来提高效率，节约时间，这很重要。另一方面，应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据，以免被误导。只有这样，网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。
　　名师点评
　　① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。
　　② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。
　　③  it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见，充分了解真题阅读，对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。
　　④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒装句。
　　倒装句的写法(部分倒装)：
　　原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。
　　only放在句首，把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。
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2011年考研英语作文热点预测范文二：醉酒驾车与安全意识与社会责任问题

 
醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任
思路点拨
　　图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机，车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题：醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述：
　　第一段：描述图画；第二段：分两个分论点进行论述：提高安全意识、提高社会责任感；第三段：建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展
　　实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。
　　例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。
　　只需要把第一段中间那句图画描述替换掉即可。
　　参考下图片：

参考作文-地带整理高分范文
　　What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the
picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
　　The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.
Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③.
For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is
irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
　　In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides,
the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。
　　佳作妙译
　　这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊！在这幅图中，烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速行驶，车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的每一位成员，都具有现实和警醒的意义。
　　这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面，安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行：你不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣
告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作为这个社会负责任的一员，我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着，我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生
命不重要，都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。
　　简言之，官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机，例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。此外，电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全意识和责任感，以降低交通事故的发生率。
　　名师点评
　　① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动，一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上！
　　② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。
　　③ DUI: 醉酒驾车，也可以写成：drunk driving。
　　④ leaving…:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。
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