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2011年考研前最后一次英语写作测试

时间:2011-01-14来源:网络资源栏目:考研英语作文作者:作文地带整理 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
2011考研前最后一天,在这一阶段,适当做些考研英语模拟题是很有必要的。考试中,时间是非常关键的,大家在利用模拟题的时候记得锻炼自己的时间把控能力,不断进步,以取得理想的成绩。各位考友加油!

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2011考研前最后一天,在这一阶段,适当做些考研英语模拟题是很有必要的。考试中,时间是非常关键的,大家在利用模拟题的时候记得锻炼自己的时间把控能力,不断进步,以取得理想的成绩。各位考友加油!

作文一:

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1. You are going to write a letter to your university newspaper editor. And your letter should include the following points.

1)Introduce the activities of volunteers in your university,

2)State its importance,

3)Your own practice

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.

参考范文:

Dear Editor,

As the growingly important role played by the Volunteers' Association in the university is concerned, I sincerely suggest that your newspaper should cover more on it.

The Volunteers’ Association has been organizing various activities, which provide opportunities for the students to know more about the society out of campus. For instance, it organizes some students to teach English in some village schools; it holds meetings and forums for students to talk about serious social problems, such as Aids and poverty. In short, the volunteer activities have become a part of the campus life.

However, the significance of the Volunteer activities lies more in enabling the college students to get accustomed to the real social life than just making their lives colorful. It has been commonly agreed that college students should get access to the society instead of studying inside the university only. As a result, the Volunteers' Association and its activities appear as a bridge between campus and the society.

As far as I am concerned, volunteer activities are just as important as study in my university life. I have joined the Volunteers' Association of my department and have taken part in various activities organized by it. What I have learnt during my work in these activities is not what I could learn in the textbooks. And I am sure I will benefit from these experiences.

Yours,

Li Ming

 
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Joozone's Directions:

Study the following charts carefully and write an article. In your article, you should cover the following points:

1) describe the phenomenon;

2) analyze the phenomenon and give your comment it.

You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

参考范文:

As is described in the picture, the boy and the girl who are in love are sitting on green ground or on long benches on campus. It is shown that love among college students has become increasingly common.

What has made campus romance so popular? There may be several possible reasons for the increasing popularity of campus love. First, with the development of society, young boys and girls become more independent than before. They believe that they are mature enough to pursue their own love. Second, stress from study and competition among peers make quite a number of students try to seek relief from love. Moreover, peer influence may also be a contributing factor. If a student sees his classmates or friends with girlfriends, he may want to try himself. If he is left alone, he may feel ashamed.

As far as I am concerned, there is nothing wrong with campus romance and no one can really ban it. What really counts is that college students should hold a reasonable attitude towards it. They should be aware that their personal relationships should not get in the way Of their study. They should keep their eyes wide open while trying to find a lifelong companion, otherwise the love will not last for long.

特别提示:

考研作文的评分标准第五档
A节(9-10分)B节(17-20分)
很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
---包含所有内容要点;
---使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
---语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
---有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
---格式和语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。

第四档  A节(7-8分)B节(13-16分)
较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
---包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1、2个次重点;
---使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
---语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别语法错误;
---采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密;
---格式和语域较恰当。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。

第三档  A节(5-6分)B节(9-12分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
---虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;
---应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
---有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
---采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;
---格式和语域基本合理。
对目标读者基本完全产生了预期的效果。

第二档  A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
---漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;
---语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
---有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;
---未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;
---格式和语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。

第一档  A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)
未完成试题规定的任务。
---明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;
---语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;
---语言错误多,有碍读者对内容的理解,语言运用能力差;
---未采用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;
---无格式和语域概念。
未能传达信息给读者。

零档  (0分)
所传达的信息或所使用语言太少,无法评价;内容与要求无关或无法辨认。跑题

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