如何读过高中生活
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Dear friends, Welcome to our school.Now vocation is over.You have become a high school student. Meanwhile,you will start a new life.As a senior three student,I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life in the following. As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,we should focus our attention on studying .However,it’s an important thing to solve the problem about studying and amateur activities.At the same time,we also should learn to face the pressure from parents and society.If we fully take advantage of the time in class,we will have time to have a rest.Faced with the parents expection,we should make it as motivation. As far as I’m concerned,aas a senior student,we should have our own ideas.What’s more,we had better adapt to the life of high schol as soon as possible.I hope all of us can be admitted to the unversity. Thank you.

批改： 1本篇文章的靓点：
 1）作者对于高中生活感悟很好，有益于高一新生快速适应高中生活。
 2)本文用了很多好的短语和句式：Meanwhile; As a senior three student,I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life in the following.; As we all know,; focus our attention on; .However; it’s an important thing to solve…; At the same time,; If we fully take advantage of the time；Faced with；As far as I’m concerned…; What’s more; be admitted to等很好的句式、短语和非谓语动词。

 2本文需要改进的地方：全文有在电脑打字时的错误拼写，而且个别词语用法不是很规范。
 1） 第一段Now vocation is over.应当改为Now summer vocation is over
 2） 第二段As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,we should focus our attention on studying .应当加上连词：As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,therefore we should focus our attention on studying .
 3） Faced with the parents expection,we should make it as motivation.应当改为：Faced with the parents’ expectation,we should consider it as motivation.
 4） As far as I’m concerned, a senior student, aas应当改为：as。
 5） What’s more,we had better adapt to the life of high schol as soon as possible. adapt to中的用法不是很明确，应当改为“adapt ourselves to”。
 评语：本文字数符合高考要求（148词）。全文行文流畅，要点全面，叙述明了，是一篇很好的作文。作为一名高三生，能写出如此好的美文，确实显现了作者的文笔功底，是一个不可多得的人才。
 
回忆高中生活(High school memories)
     Oh..I miss my high school again...Those good old days and those hard old days... I didn't like it when I was studying there...I think all Chinese who experienced high school would have the same feeling... How hard and stressful the days in high school are!
    Everyday I got up at no later than 6:00, and then I dug into study with fever pitch. From time to time, I fear once I lay off, I would lag behind. We slept at mid-night after all day's study. Every day I try to push 110% of myself into the grueling study. I took a short nap at noon and then,immediately after that, another period of hard, hard study began. Every day, it just seemed that the classroom, the school canteen, and the dorm were our only hang around... There was no one single minute that our nerves were relaxed. The once-per-month big exam was on the point of killing us. So every day we were preparing for exams. It was all no exaggeration to say that we were not given one second to take a deep breath. (英语作文网joozone.com收集整理)