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On the Bus
     This afternoon I went to see my grandma by bus. It was very crowded. I had to stand. Beside me was a woman with a little girl in her arms. But in front of her, a young man occupied two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little girl asking her mother, "What＇s wrong with the uncle?" I had thought that perhaps the mother would blame the man. But out of my expectation, the woman answered with a smile, "Be quiet. This uncle must be very tired because of hard work." The young man must have heard these words. His face turned red and he offered one seat to the little girl at once.
     The woman respected the young man and didn＇t blame him in public. In this way, she made him feeli ashamed and corrected his bad behavior. I think the woman is very smart. ( 140 words)

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    今天下午，我乘公交车去看我祖母。车上很拥挤，我只好站着。我身边站着一位怀抱小女孩的妇女，她身前有一位小青年占着两个座位，假装在睡觉。我听到小女孩在问她妈妈：“这位叔叔怎么了?”我原以为这位妈妈也许会责怪小青年，没想到她笑着说：“别吵，叔叔肯定工作累了。”小青年肯定听到了这些话，他脸红了，立刻给小女孩让了座。
    这位妇女尊重这位小青年，没有当众责备他。这样，她使他感到羞愧改正了自己的不良行为。我认为这位妇女很聪明。