2011届高考英语写作看图写话篇复习汇编-国际志愿者相关英语作文（图略）
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     Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.
   At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school.

We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.
 What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever. (Joozone.com Note:184 words)

作文地带点评：
    本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面并按照时间顺序展开叙述。
     考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。
     还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。