Improved sentences： The most valuable player on the basketball team， who is also the star of this year’s musical， will give the graduation speech (appositive)
例4， The wide receiver ran down the field. He caught the winning touchdown pass
Improved sentences： Running down the field， the wide receiver caught the winning pass (modifying phrase)
例5， The writer wanted to finish his reading. He did not want to be interrupted with questions
Improved sentences： The writer did not want to be interrupted with questions before he finished his reading. (Complex sentence)
例6， Kim， Julio， and Billy ate the casserole. Billy became ill.
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