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LSAT六大写作法则及实例练习

时间:2011-09-06来源:Joozone.Com栏目:Essay作者:未知 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
作文地带导读:LSAT六大写作法则及实例练习……
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  法则一:多运用动词和主动语态

  作为文章的编写者,你主要的任务是把你想说的用文字的方式传达给你的读者。为了达到这个目的,你可以多使用动词和主动语态来为你的文章增加生命力。

  1、在文章中把一个主要的名词换成动词例;Verb to be: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.

  Action verb: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.

  2、用一个动词来替代句子中的其中一个重要的名词或形容词例;Verb to be: The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team

  Action verb: The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team

  3、如果你不知道该如何更改动词,可以重新整理语句形式例;Verb to be: Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.

  Action verb: Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.

  以上的例子已经解析了,运用动词可以是句子更具生动性,也更能吸引读者的眼球。

  4、主动语态 Passive Voice: 例;the main idea for my essay was stated as the first sentence in the first paragraph.

  Active Voice: I stated the main idea of my essay in the first sentence in the first paragraph.

  Passive voice: money for the new recreation building was raised quickly Active voice: the recreation committee quickly raised money for the new building.

  法则2:在文章中使用借词

  在文章的写作中,少运用一些general words,反而多增加specific images. 什么是general words和specific images那,例如说; car 就是general words,因为车的种类有很多。 而Benz SUV 就是specific images。 在考试的时候,多使用specific words可以帮助把物体解释的更清楚。读者也会获得更多的信息,使他们对你的文章更方便了解。

  下面,让我们通过几个例子来证明;例1;General: Tom got into his car and drove off.

  Specific: Tom leaped into his SUV and roared off.

  例2;General: The writer wrote a three-page critique of the painting in which he said he did not like it.

  Specific: In his three-page critique, the art critic squeezed every drop of meaning- and enjoyment- out of the 3-inch by 3-inch pastel.

  General words 对人物,地点,和事物的介绍都无法给读者准备的信息,所以为了更清楚的说明,把这些名词都应该换成specific words. 例3;General: An old dog came up the street.

  Specific: An ancient, gray-muzzled golden retriever wandered up Bluebird Canyon Road.

  例4;General: My coach illustrates the point about playing fairly.

  Specific: My basketball coach, Ms Berry, illustrates the essay- ist’s point about playing fairly.

  例5;General: At the end of the day, the workmen walked up the snow-covered road.

  Specific: At the end of the day, the tired workmen trudged wearily up the snow-covered road.

  法则3:多运用动词和主动语态

  大家在写作的时候,有的同学习惯使用一些例如 ugly as sin, pretty as a picture之类的词汇。在这里,建议大家不要使用这类词汇。因为在使用这些词汇的时候,会给读者一种陈词滥调,平淡无味的感觉,更有可能使读者误会你本身的意思。尤其是在SAT写作考试当中使用。英语作文
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