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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You : , should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: :

1. 表达自己对晚交论文一事的歉意.表达自己对晚交论文一事的歉意.
2. 说明未能按时交论文的原因. 说明未能按时交论文的原因 论文的原因.
3. 表示自己将尽快把论文补交上并表示以后将按时交作业. 表示自己将尽快把论文补交上并表示以后将按时交作业.

●审题概述

● 这是一封道歉信,写的时候要遵循作文地带一直强调的道歉信的一般模式:开篇直奔主题,然后说 明原因,最后提出可能的补救措施.

第一段,对晚交论文及对此造成的后果表示歉意;
第二段,说明理由(可信的理由,而不是随便应付老师的借口);
第三段,表示尽快完成论文.

「范文」

A Letter of Apology

Dear Mr. Wang,

①I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven't even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.

I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn't go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time. Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

第一段思路点评:
◇第一段思路点评: 表明歉意

◇语言点提示:
① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用开头句式

② assign: 分配,指定,布置
③ due;到期的,预期的
④ I'm sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式;

第二段思路点评: ◇第二段思路点评: 解释原因,虽然不是真的给人道歉 但是理由还是要充分的好.
◇语言点提示: ① referential: 用作参考的

第三段思路点评: ◇第三段思路点评: 表明尽快完成论文, 表明尽快完成论文,并表示以后会按时交论文
◇语言点提示: ① try my best to……… in the future: 道歉信常用结尾
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