A Letter of Application 一封求职信

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January,2011

Dear Sirs,

I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday''''s China Daily for,as is indicated in the enclosed resume,my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.I have always been atop student in my specialized area,biochemistry.I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work.I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture,business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market.

Another point Iwant to draw your attention to is that Ihave been taking an active part in avariety of campus activities.In the due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of worki ng with your company.Or,if you are too busy these days,you can contact me at 64543575 for further information.Thank you for your favorable consideration.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Jenny Green

【参考作文地带整理点评】

这篇文章是一篇非常成功的求职信。首段表明了自己对经理助理这一职位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知这一职位的，而后说明自己的条件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，说明自己在专业上是个尖子生，并指出对于其他课程亲手得同样出色，为将来的工作奠定了坚实的基础；后两句说明自己参加了各种黉舍活动，培养了多方面的能力。第三段首句说明自己非常希望能早日获得面试的机会；次句说要是对方太忙，可以打电话联系；末句对对方表示感谢，是一句客气话。

首段中的keen表示"热切的"，parallel这里做动词，表示"与…相当，比得上"。第二段首句中的specialized area表示"专业领域"；第二句中的excel是不及物动词，表示"凸起，超常，压服他人"；第三句中的edge表示"优势"；第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示"多端的"；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示"团队精神"，interpersonal skills表示"人际交往的能力"。