My brother
There is a boy.He is very clever.He has big eyes,a small nose and a round face.He isn’t tall,but he is very cute.This boy is my brother.His English name is Jack.
Jack is a student of nine years old.At school, his teachers and classmates are very friendly to him. So he is very happy.He likes playing games very much，so he often plays games with his friends in his free time.He thinks it’s very interesting.He also likes playing soccer.
Why do we usually see him doing his math homework? Because math is his favorite subject.
Jack usually gets up at six o’clock.Then he runs on the road around my home. The early bird catches the worm.So he is very strong.I love my brother—the cute boy very much.

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