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2010年高考英语作文试题点评及范文(2)

时间:2010-06-08来源:作文地带栏目:原创英语作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
5、避开错误 考生在作文当中如果错词、错句、病句出现的太多,则会直接影响表达的效果和成绩。在写作时,考生应该尽可能地减少错误,避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误,尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句

  5、避开错误

  考生在作文当中如果错词、错句、病句出现的太多,则会直接影响表达的效果和成绩。在写作时,考生应该尽可能地减少错误,避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误,尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句子。如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误,就得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下,考生才可以考虑句式的变化,应用较多的语法结构。

  6、控制篇幅

  高考作文评分原则已经明确指出,考生作文词数少于80词和多于120词的,从总分中减去2分。由此看来,词数不够是要扣分的,而且也并不是词数写得越多就越好。因此,考生在写作时一定要按照评分原则的要求来完成写作任务,严格控制好词数,严格控制好作文的篇幅。

  7、行文紧凑

  考生在写作时,可以在作文中穿插使用一些过渡性词语。这样会使作文条理清楚,连贯自然,行文紧凑。例如:

  表示列举和顺序的:firstly, secondly, thirdly, besides, then, lastly, for one thing, for another thing, at the start, etc.

  表示让步关系的:anyway, anyhow, whatever, whenever, however, though, in any case, in spite of that, after all, all the same, etc.

  表示时间过渡的:now, suddenly, later, meanwhile, soon, suddenly, in the meanwhile, etc.

  表示概括总结的:in a word, in conclusion, in short, to sum up, etc.

  表示同位关系的:in other words, for example, namely, that is to say, for instance, that is, etc.

  表示增补和引申的:also, in addition, what's more, to make things worse, moreover,etc.

  8、不留白板

  有的考生缺乏自信,认为自己英语学得不好,写作能力差,干脆就放弃不写了,留下白板一片。根据高考评分原则和标准,我们知道,只要能写出一些和试题要求相关的词和句子,就不至于得零分。考生可以从比较简单的相对有把握的词和句子入手,按照要求写一写(当然要控制在80—120词之间),这样就增加了得分的几率。考生切忌抄前面的完形填空或阅读理解,甚至生搬硬造,写汉语拼音,企图蒙混过关,这样做只会白费笔墨,拿不到分数。

  8、仔细复查

  在答题卷上写完书面表达之后,再仔细复查一下是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节。通过复查,考生可以及时发现由于粗心大意而出现的一些完全可以避免的错误。例如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等方面的错误。这一类错误在复查时很容易发现,也容易改正,这样就进一步提高了书面表达的准确性。

参考作文地带提供范文

Dear Mr JooZone,
It is a pleasure for me to invite you to our school's speech contest as the judge for this speech, from January 1,2010 to June 30, 2010. Our school will pay you a salary of € 1250 per month and reimburse your travel expenses.
We hope that you can accept this invitation and we ask you to contact Dr. Valerie Peterson with respect to details of your research and lecturing activities during your stay in Reading .
 
Yours sincerely,
LIHua

范文二:

Dear Mr JooZone,

An English speech contest is going to be held in our school for our students in order to improve their oral English and create a better environment for speaking English. It will be held at room X on the Xth floor in the XXXX (teaching) building at XX:00 am/pm, Dec. XXth. The first three winners will be given prizes. We will have five English teachers and a student representative as judges. We are inviting you to come to our contest and we will be very honored if you could come.

Yours sincerely,
LIHua
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