专家点评：
如果是写未来，那么您可以换种思维来写，这样会让老师眼前一亮，大家写的都一样，都写未来的时候，您转身来个抓住现在的机遇，来为未来努力思考，我想会更贴合实际，更独具一格。--joozone专家编辑：李虹
Now or Never
It＇s my life, yes it＇s now or never.
I ain＇t gonna live forever.
I just want to live while I am alive.
These are the words from my favorite song, and it inspires me greatly for so long. Like cure to the soul, I hold it, to my life, as an attitude tightly. joozone.com
Now or never, it means cherishing the present. From the moment I came to this world, ! have collected memories of both happiness and bitterness.
From time to time the flashes of the past haunt me at night, making me miss so much the good days,and regret the mistakes done. Success ever made induces afrogance, while failure once experienced causes me to cower. Meanwhile, my years are falling by like the rain in vain.
What a waste, if I keep on and waste it all. I decide to cherish the present. I am living for today and just for the day. I pack up old times and walk out without the burden of my history on my shoulder.
Now or never, it means not worrying for tomorrow. Sometimes I have too many thoughts and plans for the future. When doing something, I used to care a lot about the consequence. The anxiety and uncertainty about making it or not, catch the hold of mind and I won＇t even stop my haste.
Always as the saying "More haste, less speed."
I can＇t get things as expected.
But now I have to make the best of today if I would like to succeed tomorrow. Worrying for anything does not do me any good. Let nature teach me reason and patience, the prelude to success. www.joozone.com
Now or never, it means taking the chance.
Life is a great choice, in which we＇re often offered to choose, whether spontaneously or forcedly. When seeing that both benefit, I hesitate.When I hesitate, the chance slips away.
It＇s hard to tell or count, how many opportunities I have missed in this way. As it is said, no room and no time for regrets. If one really wants to achieve something, he is not to be irresolute, but to be determined. Since I understand, every time for decision I will say to myself, "I am doing it now, or chance never comes again."
I am not going to live forever, so I live it now, or never.This is the spirit I stick to for my time being. Whether I am about to die or what, I am enjoying the sweetness along with bitter of life, now. The course of existence is precious enough.
简评
只有抓住现在，才能把握未来。一味地对过去的行为患得患失，对未来不切实际地空想，都会使人反而一事无成。最重要的是抓住现在，付诸实际行动实现自己的理想。
以上这篇文章驾御语言的能力较强，文笔飘逸而又不失严谨，段落中采用意识流的写法使读者跟着他的思路畅游了一番，而段落间层次清晰明了，使读者对整个文章的脉络一清二楚。
值得一提的是，文章采用歌词作为起始，很好地抓住了读者的注意力。而文章中精确传神的文字和表达更使全文增色不少。例如：“My years are falling by like the ……”
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