I am a chinese girl and I study in wuyilu primary school. I get up very early in the morning and then help my mother cook breakfast. after breakfast, I walk to school, because it's not far from my house.

　　I have many friends at school. We often help each other with our lessons.my mother is forty-six years old, and she works in meet all supermarket. It's near my school. the supermarket is very big, and it sells all kinds of things. the students in my school often buy school things there.

　　My father is two years younger than my mother. he is in the same supermarket, but he doesn't sell things. he's a driver.

　　My family is a happy one.

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