天津市2007年中考英语满分作文点评

“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises. From joozone.com.

I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.

作文地带点评：作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚，表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时，常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀，没有连续性，而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题，运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。