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2010高考英语满分作文名师点评(4)

时间:2010-07-19 11:30来源:作文地带 作者:英语作文 投稿收藏:收藏本文
【广东卷】 【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)

  【广东卷】

  【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文,描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)
  请严格按照作文地带所给要求写作:
    1. 词数:80-120
  2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程.

  About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
  I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
  “Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
  “Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.

  [名师点评]
  这篇文章从整体上来看,内容完整,要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上,用平实的语言,将文章娓娓道来,连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写,很生动,让人有种身临其境的感觉。

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