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（2009.湖南卷.高考英语作文点评）
假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，作文地带提供主要内容如下：
1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；
2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；
3. 谈谈你的感想。
作文地带提示注意：
1. 词数不少于120个；
2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。
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【参考范文】
Dear Zhang Hua,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.
On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled to him and let him came in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students. How time flies! Class was over before I realized it.
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hong
【解析】
本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可。
【Joozone Editor's Idea】
湖南卷这是第二次在短文写作中涉及老师（06Mr Moore，09李红）。第一次出现考生假设人是教师——“假设你是某中学新老师李红”。这个假设在历年的高考英语各卷种中都没有出现过，可以理解为考生毕业后的可能，但这个可能只能是大学毕业后的事情了，看来这个未来生活起码还得四年时间。可以划归到第三主题“与考生未来生活相关”。但由于考查的主题仍然是有关学习和课堂之间的事情，总的说来，有话可说，也有话能说，起码可以杜撰一点熟悉的东西。