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2011年英语四级写作范文:旅游

时间:1970-01-01来源:网络整理栏目:Essay作者:作文地带 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
摘要: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below
摘要:  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:  

  1)有的人喜欢独自旅行,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行

  2)两种旅行方式的好处

  3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么?

  Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

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  行文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式,提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好:有人喜欢独自旅行,有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式,并说明理由。

  高分范文

  Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

  [1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.

  [4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.

  [9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.

  亮点点评

  [1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。

  [2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。

  [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

  [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。

  [5]“倾向,趋于”。

  [6]“意外的惊喜”。

  [7]表示列举。

  [8]“和…相比”。

  [9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。

  [10]“或者…,或者”。

  佳句临摩

  1.佳句:When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions.英语作文
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