姓名 陈 茜 辽宁省大连市第24高中 学校 高二·一班级 准考证号 0300
With different kinds of evening classes and open universities popping up everywhere, there is no denying that complementary schools have played an integral part in our lives. However, my perspective is that formal universities far outweigh such complementary schools.
Allowing for more flexibility, students (Complementary schools allow more flexibility, and the students there) can adjust their study schedule to match the time of day when they are most alert (busy). Nevertheless, there also exist some disadvantages that should never be ignored. Firstly, such schools don’t have severe disciplines, thus some students are easily lured to the dreadful sin instead of the heaven for knowledge (逻辑错误, acquiring knowledge). Gang violence can be seen in such schools. Secondly, some students there just want to kill time and attach too much importance on (to) fashion. As a result, poor students would be ostracized for their shabby clothing, while middle class students would feel much pressure to spend exorbitant amounts on expensive designer clothing. Thirdly, some open schools are like marshmallows, light and fluffy with no real sub- stance. It’s a waste of time and money. Last but not least, all companies don’t view certifications (certificates) of such schools equivalent to those of formal schools. Job hunting could become a (an) insurmountable problem.
Conversely, there is a correlation between formal universities and the word “authority”. Firstly, universities provide an ideal environment for study with rules promoting discipline. Needless to say, it will stimulate students to discuss about thought-provoking issues and exchange their own experiences. Secondly, formal universities can creat (create) a sense of cohesiveness, which leads students to work within a group concept. It’s an all-important factor in the society. Thirdly, students can build successful human interaction in (on) campus since they have more time to spend together, finding they have more in common with one another. Life in universities is like food, be it nutritious food for our body or spiritual food for our soul.
There are several examples of some individuals who get success without university experience. However, there’re tens of thousands of examples who fail. Auending a formal university, as a general rule of thumb, is the best way to go.
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