家长为子女作出牺牲

Parents Make Sacrifices for Their Children

Parents often make selfless sacrifices in order to educate their children well. They are willing to do all the exhausting household chores so that children can bury themselves in piles of books (埋读).
They turn off TV when children concentrate on their assignments (作业). To parents their pleasures and pastimes are nothing vital compared with creating a learning atmosphere. Although they never expect children to appreciate their efforts or reward them, they DO wish that children could understand their intentions.

However, sometimes children can not understand parents＇ sacrifices. Some children take them for granted, because they have been used to these sacrifices from childhood. Sense of self centeredness gradually develops into selfishness. Some disagree with parents but are unable to persuade them. Chances given, these children prefer to do elementary household chores (家务活) like tidying bedrooms, sweeping the floor and washing dishes.

In my personal judgement, parents should not completely sacrifice themselves to children＇s academic interest and welfare. It is unwise for them to pin(寄托，寄寓) all expectations and hopes on their children while neglecting themselves. Various sacrifices in monetary(金钱的), material and spiritual terms may change into pressure on children rather than motivation for more satisfactory results.
核心剖析
在用词方面，名词准确无误、动词生动活泼、修饰成份丰满细腻。句型多变，主次分明。句子细节充实、内涵丰富，句意明晰、表现力强。伞文在遣词造句方面展示了作者具有扎实的语言基本功和练习积累。