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一个繁忙的早晨a busy morning

时间:2010-08-06来源:未知栏目:初中英语作文作者:英语作文收藏:收藏本文我要点评
作者:韩红 初中八年级 This is a beautiful picture.You can see many things in it.It is a fine morning.You can see the sun and the moon in the sky.You can also see two planes over the children's heads.The children are going to school.They look very happy. On the grid

作者:韩红 初中八年级
This is a beautiful picture.You can see many things in it.It is a fine morning.You can see the sun and the moon in the sky.You can also see two planes over the children's heads.The children are going to school.They look very happy.

On the gridge there are cars and buses.There are also some people on their bikes.They are going to work.Under the bridge there is a train.On the river there is a ship and some boats.Some people go to work by boat.It is a busy morning.
【作文地带点评】本文行文流畅,结构合理,将桥上、桥下情景描绘得清楚明白,在用there be 结构时作者注意到了就近原则,把早晨的美景生动地描绘出来,仿佛一点都不像看图作文。

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