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How to face failure 英语作文

时间:2010-09-03来源:英语作文投稿栏目:中考英语作文作者:kgojty 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
习作原文 Being grateful is an important philosophy of life and a great wisdom.It is impossible for anyone to be lucky and successful all the time as long as he lives in the world .We should learn how to face failure bravely and to try to deal with it. I think
习作原文

Being grateful is an important philosophy of life and a great wisdom.It is impossible for anyone to be lucky and successful all the time as long as he lives in the world .We should learn how to face failure bravely and to try to deal with it.

I think we should be grateful to life whenever we are unsuccessful or unlucky .Only by doing this can we find our weakness and shortcomings when wwe fail .We can also get relief and warmth when we are unlucky .Being grateful is a way to sing for our life which comes just from our love and hope.



批 改 老 师 maotouying 评 分 95分 级 别 优秀 批 改

1.....all the time as long as he lives in the world. 本句话中he改为we,因为通篇文章用的都是第一人称的手法,此处也应该保持一致。

2.We should learn how to face failure bravely and to try to deal with it. 后面的to 应该去掉,前面一个to就可以引导后面的两个动词短语了。

3....when wwe fail. 本句话中we拼写出现了错误。

参考例句(文)

1.It is impossible for anyone to be lucky and successful all the time as long as we lives in the world .

2.We should learn how to face failure bravely and try to deal with it.

点 评

本文题材写的是记叙文,更准确的说应该是一篇散文,在内容上是一篇很好的散文诗。文章长句运用语法句法错误很少,可以看出作者的基本功不错。文中出现的问题有3处,只要稍加注意就可以避免。

给 分 理 由

第一处人称不一致扣2分;

第二处不定式to多余,扣2分;

第三处单词拼写错误,扣1分;

最后得分95分。

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