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2010考研英语作文:申请单人宿舍

时间:2011-01-11来源:作文地带整理栏目:考研英语作文作者:作文地带整理 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
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2010考研英语作文:申请单人宿舍
Dear Sir or Madam,
   I am a freshman from Department of Chinese language and literature in this college.I am writing the letter in purpose of asking for a single room. this primary reasons are as follows :Firstly, I live in a dormitory which I share with another student who always smokes before going to bed;Secondly, my roommate inviting friends to vist so freguently that I do not work there. I wonder if it is convenient for you to render me a single room next term. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. From joozone.com.
     I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

参考点评:要注意写信的格式,格式也是有分的。总体写得不错,个别动词的用法需注意下,注意下动词的时态问题即可。继续加油,问题不大,结构也不错,主体部分写了两个原因,之后也适时地表达了换房间的请求,而且语气上把握得很好,收信的对方是校长,所以态度一定要客气,这点很好。继续加油!希望你越写越好。

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