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2011英语六级高分范文(六)

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摘要:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: Directions: For
摘要:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡

  2)分析产生该现象的原因

  3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议  我要高分

  Credit Cards on Campus

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  行文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。

  高分范文

  Credit Cards on Campus

  In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.

  [4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.

  [5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.

  【亮点点评】

  [1]“越来越流行”。

  [2]“随着”,介词。

  [3]“越来越多的”。

  [4]用于引出原因。

  [5]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

  [6]which引导非限制性定语从句。

  [7]表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式,用词富于变化。

  [8]“由此,因此”。

  [9]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。英语作文
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