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My English teacher is very clever and beautiful.

She is a good teacher and her students love her very much!

She can teach students very well!

She is very good to her students,so students are very active in her classes!

My English is too bad before.（建议修正，见下文点评）

My English got good when Miss Gao taught me!She is a really very good teacher,we really love her!

英语作文网编辑点评：

夏宇同学这篇英语作文写的简短，短短几句话便体现了一名中学生对其英语老师的敬重之情，充分反映了他们的英语老师在作者心中的地位和其重要，我们相信，本文主人公在英语方面的学习一定不错，因为只有你对某门课的老师的心态对了，才可能学好这个老师的这门课。同时祝福您的英语成绩天天进步，很羡慕您有这么好的一位英语老师。您的文章整体上很不错。继续努力！

本文欠缺之处：该文有些“中国式的英语”写法比较遵从“中式英语”，比如：“My English is too bad before” 一句话，您可以用其他的方式来表达，不一定要直白的来体现，我们可以这么来写这句话：“not good at all” 或者“doesn't study well”来表达too bad ，完整表达这句话可以这么说：“my english was very poor previously”，或者“I was not good at English,but my English has been improving fast since I met my English teacher ***（老师名） .”也可以这么说“i was not good at Englsh until i met with the teacher Miss Gao”。希望您以后多背诵一些名言警句，对您的作文提高很有帮助，谢谢您来joozone投稿，如果还有其他需要可以直接给编辑在下方留言，英语作文网是大家学习交流的一个平台。希望大家投稿时注明邮件地址，方便我们给您点评后回信告知。