My dream that I can make it true

适度的修改以下两篇英语作文，就可以写出怎么样能成为以名好医生的英语作文：

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I want be a doctor 我想成为一名医生

I hope I can become a doctor in the future.I was born in a doctor's family.My parents are both doctors.They are always busy working for patients' health and have no time to look after me.They saved many people's lives during their work.The doctor is called "Angles in White".Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore,i wish to be a doctor like my parents.I hoped future I might be a doctor. 我希望未来的我能够成为一名医生.我出生在一个医生世家.我的父母都是医生.他们经常忙于照顾自己的病人,没有时间来照顾我.在他们工作期间,他们挽救了许多人的生命.医生被人们称为"白衣天使".因为医生可以让那些身受病痛折磨的人摆脱痛苦。可以让人变得健康.同时，我认为，帮助了别人，自己也将会得到快乐。所以,我希望自己成为像父母一样的医生,我希望未来我可以做一个医生。

我的梦想是成为一名医生(MY DREAM IS BEING A DOCTOR)
I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.
Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.
May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.
我是一个平凡的人，我有一个平凡的梦想：做一名医生。
因为医生可以让那些身受病痛折磨的人摆脱痛苦。可以让人变得健康。
同时，我认为，帮助了别人，自己也将会得到快乐。所以，我希望未来我可以做一个医生。